Posted by Kevin Foxboy on November 11, 2013 at 13:46:31:
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In Reply to: Anyone care to review my e-book? posted by James Rau on June 16, 2012 at 14:33:08:
The sample epub chapters set an interesting alt world. I'm not sure my questions matter to the plot. It seems pre-technology;the kitchen water-crank for example. It seems centaurs rule rather benevolently; I wonder why they'd bother, what do they get from the deal?
Your reference to the Jacquard loom and 'computers' seemed anachronistic; are centaurs deliberately keeping tech from humans? The schoolteacher seemed thrilled to get a gift abacus; if he keeps financial records it's useful.
Feel free to direct conversation, rebuttal, any insults to Kevin. I'm a talkative fox and I'll leave cookies and a light on the porch.
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